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My words (a random display of my own creative writing)

Bad to verse

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Two haiku:

Creeping silent from

her lair – she came to get the

reeking camembert.

 

And now she licks her

chops, blinking calmly on the

mutilated socks

 

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About elainecanham

I started blogging because I'm a writer, and I thought I ought to. Now I realise that I blog because I like to; even when I can't think of much to say.

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9 thoughts on “Bad to verse

  1. The first one is my favorite, although a bit cheesy. Lair doesn’t rhyme with camembert when mispronounced. I should write a haiku or two too, but I’ve forgotten how many syllabubs.

    Posted by Bruce Goodman | August 5, 2014, 3:54 pm
    • I think you’re over egging the pudding, there. Mr G. and it does so rhyme. 5.7.5 And no wind in the cherry blossoms, please.

      Posted by elainecanham | August 5, 2014, 4:19 pm
  2. Groan…..
    xxx Gigantic Hugs xxx

    Posted by davidprosser | August 5, 2014, 2:07 pm
  3. I love them. I’ll put one up too.

    Posted by naptimethoughts | August 5, 2014, 1:47 pm
  4. Clever title

    Posted by lbwoodgate | August 5, 2014, 1:17 pm

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